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KJOTT
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since 2012-12-26
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0 posted 2014-03-16 01:15 AM


For St. Patrick's Day. Try and read it in your best Irish.
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Upon Waking in the Churchyard
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Spare me the lecture, Father—
I'm going to hell and we both know it
And all the choirs and blather
Won't but start me suffering years
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Before me allotted time. You'd make
The Devil's work a damned sight quicker
If I weren't deaf in both ears twice before me wake—
For all your moaning for me soul
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Spare me the lecture, Father—
I'm going to hell and we both know it
Aye, and it don't seem right a man should suffer
Twice for the same sin.
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(c) kevinjtaylor

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2014-03-16 06:31 AM


This is delightful!  Thanks for the tip about the Irish accent... it made for a remarkable difference. I really enjoyed this poem!!!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2014-03-16 07:40 AM


Ahhh . . . Kevin, this is just wonderful. Too bad I didn't have any green beer to toast the old sinner.

~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~

KJOTT
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since 2012-12-26
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Canada
3 posted 2014-03-17 07:35 PM


LOL ... Green beer.. I'm Irish and have never had a drop of it. A little Irish whiskey though. Not enough to get into his kind of trouble! Although you'd have to wonder where the idea came from. Happy St. Pat's.
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