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Open Poetry #49
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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
0 posted 2014-01-11 07:19 AM


The poetry step by step,
Hundred gutters exile themselves,
Forgive my demise,

In my flesh-coloured rocking,
Contemplate Indians,
Shoot ahead.

Your eyes are some coal,
The fire disorders me,
Down with stars.
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-01-11 08:14 AM

An interesting poetry of the disseminating kind, Yann. Short and to the point delivery.When your last line "Down with stars," it was frightening.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.
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