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Open Poetry #49

beautiful presents

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2016-11-05 11:26 PM

She makes beautiful presents,
The undecided sky in her hair,
The moon and her boasting,
The Grand Canyon in her hesitations,
Strawberries in her naked smiles,
Stars when she gets dizzy,
And then this road which does not finish,
The road which crosses the pampa and time,
This road which runs every day in her eyes … ..

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-11-06 09:03 AM

This is just beautiful Yann. What a cool selection of words you have woven together to make this this wonderful poem.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2016-11-06 04:04 PM

thanks a lot jerry, your comment has enlightened my poem so much, have a very nice and warm evening,

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2016-11-10 04:42 PM

fantastic presentation...james

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2016-11-10 11:06 PM

thanks a lot James, this is very kind
yann

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

5 posted 2016-11-14 12:09 PM

So many lovely thoughts dear yann. Sweet and lovely.

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2016-11-23 11:44 PM

Charming poem, lovely thoughts, yann.

Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2016-11-26 08:22 PM

thanks day of view and Ida, for reading and commenting

yann

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