navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » My poetry
Open Poetry #49
Post A Reply Post New Topic My poetry Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2016-11-03 12:25 PM



Writing poetry is like meandering
into a shady road
Sometimes you stop at a wayside
to rest or dream.

It is a journey
into the insets of your soul
your mind and heart.

You never know at the start
where it will lead you
it can take you far, farther
out of sight...

beyond all horizons
where time is no barrier
and space a non-existent place.

Come join me in my adventure.

@jjote 11/3/2016

© Copyright 2016 Josefina Costales - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-11-03 01:16 PM


You capsuled poetry with this neat poem, jjote. Yep, it is like taking a road into the known and unknown. Love when you spoke of how far it would take you. Much further sometimes than you could ever possibly have dreamed.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2016-11-03 03:17 PM


Beautiful thoughts..seems I'm just enjoying the scenery these days.

As you said, the wayside is a wonderful place to dream.


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2016-11-10 04:41 PM


enjoyed reading this...james
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2016-11-10 11:11 PM


this is beautiful, the mainstream idea run like freedom, thanks


yann

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
5 posted 2016-11-11 01:09 PM


You're so right jjote dear. Save a seat for me!

...just bein' Bluesy

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » My poetry

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary