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Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
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Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-02-27 12:09 PM


Pleased to make your acquaintance. I see you've loosened your wrap.
May I take it for you?

It's a bit crowded I know, but still,it's a comfortable air that keeps me.
I hope it does the same for you. Tell me, what was it that brought you here?

Please don't say "the car". My previous entanglement used to say that.
Was that a slight smile I just saw?

I know you have your burdens and your temptations. They seem to want to follow you.
Of course they do.

So do I.

It's said the nights are long here, and that the dawn whispers it's way into the early hours on warm southern breezes. I'd like to listen to it sometime with you.

Bold?

No, at least that's not my intention. There's an allotted time for us all. All we know of it is that it's short. We shouldn't make it any shorter, just learn to live within it's parameters and enjoy it's unique emotions and struggles.

Whoops!

Sorry if I sound like I'm preaching. It's a habit. As if I really knew you.
I want to.

I guess I just want to let you know that I feel for you. I could as soon as you came in. I'd like to spend some time together with you, if you'd like that.

It's all in the dreaming...maybe.

Floating on turbulent waters towards a distant shore. It's good to sail on high seas. Someone once said that sexuality was equal to one's perceptions and expressions of bodies of water.

The deep oceans I see in your eyes makes me feel it was you.

The sands will be warm.

Let's leave this place, and marry our dreams together, 'til the dawn whispers in the new day.


Touch, but don't look

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-02-27 01:18 PM


I've conducted my self with my other self and had inspiring conversation such as this too, Jack. Going home alone can be such a drag. Would I invite a drag inside? According how hot the conversation gets I would imagine. Heh.Heh

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-02-27 03:06 PM


I'm not touching this conversation with a 10ft pole.  Good write Jack.

Lori

Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
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3 posted 2014-02-27 03:50 PM


Here ya go! **hands Lori a 12 ft pole**

Touch, but don't look

Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
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4 posted 2014-02-27 03:50 PM


Thanks Jerry!

Touch, but don't look

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2014-02-27 07:08 PM


fine writing...James
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