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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2016-09-09 05:26 PM



my gawd, jerry
I never thought it could happen
to you
my gawd man your arms have shriveled away
those muscles you used to have
remember
now, in their place
are small little bumps
where there used to be muscle
on the other hand
you’re not bed-ridden yet
although your knees sometimes
wants to go out on you
and when you’re walking sweet Zoe you’re panting
near the end and
your mind
some days seems to be almost gone
plus the memory loss drives you quite insane
eh . . . but you haven’t been stuck
in one of those horrible nursing homes
sitting in a wheelchair
dribbling what is left of your life
down that bib they gave you to wear
you should be happy
you’re in much better shape than so many
who have the same
problems and age as do you
emphysema for one you’ve had fifteen years
maybe longer
what’d you say about that memory loss
not to forget high blood pressure
and lest we forget
enlarged prostate and of course hyperthyroidism
hyperventilation too . . .
oh you take enough drugs
both prescription an across-the-counter
(no more street drugs)
that if you wasn’t on medicare
you would most certainly be quite dead
oh, lest we forget
you take medicine for nervous disorders
and of course treatment for pain
somedays’ you’re surprised
to awake every friggin’ day
my gawd, Jerry

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2016-09-10 12:46 PM


excellent jerry, you do a great job, i can reassure you, the "brain" is intact and besides we all need médecine, whatever old we are

yann

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2016-09-10 08:24 AM


Thanks Yann . . . Eh, my brain is okay I guess except for these aggravating memory losses.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Redstart
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3 posted 2016-09-10 03:14 PM


Reminds me of George Sanders. He topped himself when he knew the game was up. 'No patronising, young nurse is ever going to wipe my arse.' A hero of mine.
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-09-10 03:17 PM


Hah! Yes, yes indeed, that is wonderfully said, Redstart. So far I haven't gotten that far in my progression of life. Thank goodness.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Redstart
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5 posted 2016-09-10 03:22 PM


I'm so pleased to here that, Jerry. A big up to you!
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2016-09-10 03:37 PM


Yessss to that big up!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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