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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2016-08-31 07:48 PM


New Morning

New morning, a blue mourning
shrouds the inner landscape of me
clouds and softness blossoming
just on the outskirts of my dream
if I thought of you now,
I'd doom my heart into feathers and sky
so I'm thinking of you now,
my insides skittering like a dragonfly
no wonder why
this is love

Blue dawning, a new longing
daylight shaking sadly from my trees
tonight the city is crumbling
bust of anything that can set you free
just on the tip of a finger,
an inch from touching my resistance gate
so I'm touching you now,
my fears smashing into endless ocean waves
that's exactly why
I'm in love

Close your eyes
feel the night
see the sewn-up wounds of
the things you think you need
tell your lies
trace the light
back to the arms of the moment
you left hanging on me

Open your eyes
see the light
feel the listless wonder of
the things you think you want
tell me true
out the blue
back to the arms of commitment
and dreams you always haunt

New morning, blue is adoring
the way you smile away everything
and set us upon new meaning
just on the outskirts of my dream
if I thought of you now,
I'd burst into dancing on a sunlight sky
and I'm thinking of just how
you can kiss my life's rainclouds bye bye
no wonder why
that's exactly why
I'm in love
my heart of feathers and sky
my insides skittering like a dragonfly
by now you must see why
this is love

New morning, blue morning...

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2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2016-08-31 09:56 PM


so beautiful;, we love mornings specially when we are in love, your words are delicate like the blue light


yann

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2016-09-05 10:42 PM


So much to love, so much to mourn, so impeccably blue on you.

Your poems are such special gifts!!


Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
3 posted 2016-09-06 12:58 PM


Just a short breaths distance apart, the stanzas make your poetry blend so well.

...just bein' Bluesy

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