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Jack Napes
Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-02-26 08:13 PM


before

you

came

I

sat

in

the

swing

thinking

it

was

a

chair
                      It's actually a profile of my face. Does that count as an extra post?



Touch, but don't look

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latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2014-02-26 10:31 PM


l like this,
can read a lot into it. Jo perry

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-02-27 06:33 AM


Funny how the mind plays tricks. I guess one reads what they expect. (you're so bad)Somehow, the first read through I thought you meant the chair was a rocker when she came.  

Lori  

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (02-27-2014 10:28 AM).]

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
3 posted 2014-02-27 07:44 AM


"Get back Jack, do it again" (Steely Dan)

...just bein' Bluesy

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