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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2016-08-13 10:02 AM



This is the fourth day of continuous rain in South Louisiana where I live . . .

STOP!

Rain makes me feel sad
Four days of steady downpour
Reported three dead

©August 13, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2016 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2016-08-13 11:59 AM


rain can seriously be depressing and hearing about the deaths doesn't help. hugs! ~L
Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

2 posted 2016-08-13 12:14 PM


Yep, Louisiana is one wet job alright, but deaths are another thing. So sad. You give the feel of the rain and the depression so well. Here's to some sunshine for you.
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2016-08-13 12:15 PM


Yeah, you're right . . . Thanks for the hugs . . . Reading your book slowly, sha, of course I am liking it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
4 posted 2016-08-13 12:17 PM


Appreciate the sunshine, Redstart. I have lived down here a long time and I have never seen four days of continuous rain before.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
5 posted 2016-08-13 05:50 PM


Are you expecting to have to leave your home Jerry? I read where so many have had to. Stay safe pal.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2016-08-13 06:04 PM


No Ari, I live on high ground, I am fortunate, many have lost everything, some their lives.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie
7 posted 2016-08-14 09:00 PM


Yes, it's very sad to know how people can be caught in floodwater. It sounds like you are safe though and that's a blessing. That you care about those people says alot about you!

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
8 posted 2016-08-14 11:43 PM



Jerry, I am happy to see you are on high ground. I come on tonight to see if you were okay.Now I can get on to reading andwatching the Athletes. best to you, Jo  

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
9 posted 2016-08-15 07:51 AM


You make me felt special, Jo, that you came here to check on my well being. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
10 posted 2016-08-16 02:18 AM


Just peeking too on the regulars here. Me, am sort of dry out on writing. Good to see you still keep the posts coming
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
11 posted 2016-08-16 08:23 AM


Thanks jjote, yeah, I try ti keep on keeping on as far as the writing is concerned.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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