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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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0 posted 2014-01-09 09:01 PM




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I love how faces
bloom
like flowers

Kissing the sun as it
wakes
from its rest

They speak in glow
and tinctures
of tint

Waiting for karma
to finally
confess

I adore, the radiance
of
your facet

What more can I say
except

I love hue

I’m glad that I have
the ability
to sketch

I paint with pain
and write,
with light

Emotions as color and inklings
for ink

Your glance makes me
colorblind
trying,
to think

It’s a curse
of consciousness

Living, with awe

Longing and wonder
being,
my flaw

You are my aura and you,
are my air

You are the sight in the mirror
so fair

You’re the complexion
of night,
up above

My brush is forever

In you,
with love


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2014-01-10 09:02 PM


Are these your paintings, Rich? They are beautiful. Lovely poem.
                                 Ida

Richy
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2 posted 2014-01-11 08:32 AM


no not mine Ida, only the words..

thanks so much for always taking the time to stop in and leave a smile..


EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
3 posted 2014-01-11 09:29 AM


I feel the colors of your poem alive and free !
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2014-01-11 01:30 PM


The hues of you are truly mesmerizing.  
Very pretty poetry, you.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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5 posted 2014-01-11 03:38 PM


thanks so much Emma and Lori your special words mean a lot


katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
6 posted 2014-01-16 02:51 AM


Loved it! Love your play on words, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Richy
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7 posted 2014-01-17 06:17 PM


thank you Kat, great to hear from you again.. hope all is swell


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
8 posted 2014-01-18 05:51 AM


What a graceful flow in this poem, dear Richy. It is brilliantly expressed and I would say that it has an "energizing, inspiring effect". Wonderful, simply wonderful.

So good to see you back, Richy!

Margherita

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

9 posted 2014-01-18 07:29 AM


thank you so much Margy it is so nice to come back and visit some very dear friends..

take good care of you please


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