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Open Poetry #49

Star Gazing

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2016-07-26 02:48 PM

If I were more of a poet
I would have gazed at the stars...
But alas! As it were
Her moonlit face
Drew my gaze away
From that celestial beauty
To the one much closer --
And I -- breathless --
Admitted
That in that reflection
The stars
Had found a perfect host.

CG

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2016-07-26 02:50 PM

How wonderfully romantic! I love it!~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-07-26 03:04 PM

I couldn't agree with Lori more. This is a tender moment in poetry.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2016-07-27 05:36 PM

That's one way to a girls heart.
Perfection!!!

So happy to read you here CG.

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

4 posted 2016-07-28 11:24 PM

Looking isn't always seeing and seeing isn't always looking. Like hearing and listening, beauty is where you find it. Warm and refreshing poetry.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

5 posted 2016-07-31 03:19 PM

You love her. x

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