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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-03-22 12:49 PM




Long ago in Lambeth
South of the Frog and Toad
Was a corner shop called Masie’s
Just off of the Walworth road
~
On the counter sat a one eyed cat
In a cage a Mynah Bird
Who could swear in several languages
Including some you've never heard
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There were sweets in jars and chocolate bars
Liquorice sticks and sugar candy
Papers and mags for mums and dads
And the Beano and the Dandy
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In those childhood days now far away
My hero’s could come to me
No not Superman but Desperate Dan
And Gnasher I long to see
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Now sad to say I learnt today
Dan has eaten his last cow pie
Gone with Masie and her Mynah Bird
Somewhere lost in the cyber sky
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2016-03-22 04:35 PM


THIS  is beautiful in a lopsided, funny way, Cari . . .
quote:
No not Superman but Desperate Dan
And Gnasher I long to see

Yep, gotta love that Gnasher, and of course Desperate Dan was always . . . er . . . Desperate!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Cari
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Englnand
2 posted 2016-03-22 05:03 PM


The Beano and the Dandy were Brit comics Jerry. Kid’s humour that would send the political corrective crowd today into hysterics but they never did us the readers any harm.

Masie’s shop, her cat and Mynah bird really existed, hence the fond memories.I don't know how to do pics here but they would help the piece  

Thanks for reading.

Cari.

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2016-03-22 05:30 PM


To prevent more misunderstanding you should have some kind of footnote about such characters as Beano and Dandy. I feel used.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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