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Open Poetry #49

A Slice of Wanting

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2016-02-11 09:14 PM

A Slice of Wanting

She is a beautiful personality
hidden from view it seems
waiting to be exposed and enjoyed
much like a cool ocean breeze;
I was glad when she ask me over
for a slice of chocolate pie,
I inquired would it be a dark chocolate slice?
She says that can be arranged,
she  too knows dark  chocolate is nice...
Why will I go; because I want to
and she also wants me there,
she having her reasons to invite
and me having reasons to accept;
Now I am there,
she smiles as she takes my hand
and I find myself wanting,
wanting to know her heart.

JamesLee
2/11/16

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2016-02-12 08:40 AM

Hope you got a big slice of that pie, James..
You can tell you were really hungry for it..

Nice portrayal of the scene and mood.

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

2 posted 2016-02-12 08:50 AM

oo I'm sure the chocolate would melt in your mouth

Michael

booky1940!
Member

since 2009-04-16

Posts 136
Canada

3 posted 2016-02-12 09:53 AM

A slice of wanting,
Wanting to know her heart!
I hope that she is beautiful as the chocolate pie is sweet! Thanks for sharing, James!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2016-02-12 12:47 PM

A chocolate pie is quite the motivation, dear James, to indulge in romantic explorations. Great combination for a very lovely poem.

Love,
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2016-02-13 05:45 PM

James I'm always glad to read your romantic verses.
There's a romantic peace about them that's very nice.

Yum, dark chocolate pie!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2016-02-17 09:41 PM

Thank you ice, Michelmas, booky1940, Margherita and ethome for the nice response...james

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