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quatro04
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0 posted 2016-02-11 01:35 AM



Silence

Silence
a peaceful sound
proclaiming every word
that is spilled from my lover's mouth
quinching his puckered lips
then beckons for
a kiss.

Naome

© Copyright 2016 Naome James - All Rights Reserved
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2016-02-11 06:13 AM


Welcome to pip,q-04-Naome

Words can certainly stir the mind and body,
especially when they are spoken in a silent place, when two are alone.

At the right time, can (quinch)beckon (stir-move) two towards a passionet  kiss..

This is the first poem I have seen you post-- I am looking forward to more.



"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2016-02-11 09:02 AM


Indeed, from a lovers mouth comes soft, sensual words followed by that first wonderful kiss.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2016-02-11 06:00 PM


Very lovely, dear Naome, and welcome to Pip!

May you enjoy our blue pages.


Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2016-02-12 01:47 PM


Dear Naome, you deserve another round to be welcomed!

Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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5 posted 2016-02-12 03:06 PM


Naome,
Welcome to the blue buffet! I think you'll like it here. I enjoyed your poem and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
~L

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2016-02-12 09:16 PM


nice....james
quatro04
Junior Member
Posts 12

7 posted 2016-02-13 12:22 PM


Thank you all for your kind words and warm  welcome.

I look forward to posting and communicating more with all of you.


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2016-02-13 03:07 PM


Welcome to PIP quatro04
He's in for a real nice surprise.
Good stuff!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA
9 posted 2016-02-21 08:10 PM


Naome, Romantic & lovely.
A warm welcome to you Poetess..
J

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