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Reverie
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Reverie |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio 
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Accustomed to the constant raging motion, (or the big becalming) of a life in temperament, so like the ocean, I somehow fell asleep inside this tiny, patchwork vessel made of strife and snippets of dreams. It seems I was adrift until the gift of leaking at the seams destroyed my dry indifference. Seeking my position, I looked up. Where stars had been before, a score of pearls began to whirl and dive, then pecked my sail to tatters. So, rudderless, my frail conveyance drifted on to other matters. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Hmm. I think you were having not only snippets of dreams, but you must have been so blissfully dreaming soundly that your "ship" drifted far far away from shores. Dream on my lady... |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Thanks for taking time to read me! Streaming, dreaming, sometimes you just go with it, yes? Smiles, Constance |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Waiting for the next instalment, "The other matters", enjoyed reading this. Thanks Pete |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
"So, rudderless, my frail conveyance drifted on to other matters". Any frailty you may have my dear is shored up by every breath you take. Exquisite poetry. Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
James, thank you. |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Pete, thanks. I'll let you know when the next matter comes. Mr. Martini, Thank you for your kind attention. So kind of you! It made me smile. Constance |
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