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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-02-15 11:23 AM



I feel the rhythm

of your breathing

as I watch you sleep

I feel you draw a breath
from my love’s depth

long and soft and deep

I feel like touching

Is a euphemism
LGR©2/15/14

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-02-15 11:28 AM


Nice poem, Lori.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-02-15 11:30 AM


Thanks, Jerry
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2014-02-15 11:45 AM


fine 'Romanticism!"
EmmaRose
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4 posted 2014-02-15 11:53 AM


this has a woman's touch, warm and lovely

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2014-02-15 12:27 PM


Thanks Bruce! I like my "mushy stuff"

Emmarose!  Thanks for the comment I know just what you mean!

Lori

Richy
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6 posted 2014-02-15 02:08 PM



holy moly, this lucky guy's valentines day might just go on all weekend.. ! ..

haha.. what a great smile this one gives


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2014-02-16 06:56 AM


Richy, who says he is the one getting lucky ?

Lori

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