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devina
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0 posted 2015-07-13 03:10 PM



I am daughter, eldest and heir
chagrined into darker winds.
Clear burdens float awash, un-sinned.
Maker whispers me.. "Just blend"..

Primed drops pool, undulate fresh fell
shed jewels unto chilled sky..
Maker gifts thorny world my swell,
orbs soak earth in endless cry.

As eldest allows no weakness-
"Douse it only if Justified."
Standing tall proud retainer
to a crown abhorred, am I.

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2015-07-13 04:12 PM


Ahhh . . . I am the eldest, but as far as being an heir, I walked away from whatever it would be and the rest of it too. Haven't been back there in many, many years. I have never been a "blender."

Loved this . . .
quote:
Standing tall proud retainer
to a crown abhorred, am I.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
2 posted 2015-07-13 04:42 PM


My many thanx Jerry.. sometimes the
walk-away seems more prudent to me as well,
..of demand & obligation comes the proud but
weary m'thinks..

So good to see you misters
~T

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-07-16 09:06 PM


fine writing...james
devina
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Cali
4 posted 2015-07-20 04:23 PM


Sweetest of thanx fer the read, sir James!
best of days to you..
~d

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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