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Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2014-02-11 11:50 PM

The wind is for sail
if you
can afford

A wall is obstructive
unless
your adored

I would rather have
none
of my wishes,
come true

Than not have, a dream
so pretty
so blue

I keep you, on top
of the peak
of above

We cannot, be born
unless
there is love

I put you way up
so I don’t
let you down

That’s why the
words
are not always, around

I want to make love,
like raindrops
to flowers

Lets steal every second
and make them
all hours

The light of your
sky
and my rumble,
have met

The thunder and lightning
has made
the world wet

I hear when you
sigh
at the top,
of your lungs

Your lap, of ellipse

Speaks softly
in tongues

photo 350px-Szinyei_Merse_Paacutel_-_Lovers_1869_zps045fa6c0.jpg

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-02-12 06:08 AM

Richy-
Your poem is like the babbling brook you know is in the foreground of the painting (good choice).... It is pleasing to the ear and delights the soul.

Lori

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2014-02-12 06:44 AM

This plays with me very nicely:

quote:
"Lets steal every second
and make them
all hours"

There's an intimacy throughout your poetry that is very pleasing indeed.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2014-02-12 07:09 AM

Very nice thought within the lines of this poem.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2014-02-12 08:10 PM

Thank you Lori G.. yes babbling sounds just about right haha

it makes me smile that you were here..

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2014-02-12 08:12 PM

I appreciate that Bluesy S.. that was kind of you..

thanks for the visit

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2014-02-12 08:12 PM

thank you Jerry

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2014-02-21 08:01 PM

Oh brother, you are the last of the great romantics.
Your words makes me melt into a puddle and breathe a long breathless sigh.

Just Beautiful, Richy!!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2014-02-22 12:50 PM

Wow, after Blues' comment, I'm just gonna say I really liked this too, my friend. Much enjoyed.

j.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2014-02-23 02:49 PM

i am at that Lori.. dont forget to put, hopeless, in front of the, romantic, though..

i dont think im ever going to look at a puddle the same way now..

thanks for always being such a great poetry friend..

[This message has been edited by Richy (02-23-2014 03:50 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2014-02-23 03:46 PM

This a top notch love poem. These words pierced my heart in a good, good way . . .

quote:
I want to make love,
like raindrops
to flowers

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

11 posted 2014-02-23 03:57 PM

thanks for all the kind words today jerry..

they are always appreciated and encouraging..

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2014-02-23 03:58 PM

thanks so much Jwess..

always happy to hear from you

hope things are swell

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

13 posted 2014-02-24 09:33 AM

quote:
I would rather have
none
of my wishes,
come true

Than not have a dream
so pretty
so blue

Blessed be indeed the dreams, where perfection peaks are easily reached. Soft speak at a grand level, dear Richy. This poem is heart beat accelerating and brings joy.

Margherita

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

14 posted 2014-02-24 09:02 PM

oh Margy you always say the kindest things..

i hope all is well, youre the best!

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