Love's Assurance - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #49

Love's Assurance

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-11 05:19 AM

It took me awhile
to know the difference
between her painted smile
and her self assurance
After all,
I was falling in love

The way we met,
our eyes fixated,
looking back I should have waited,
but then one touch and I was baited
After all,
I was falling in love

How long those warm summer breezes blew,
from across the bay into her room,
where our passions played
with our hearts renewed
After all,
we were falling in love

Still, it took me awhile
to know the difference
between her love
and my assurance,
that I,
had fallen in love

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-02-11 09:12 AM

Yes indeed, it all joins together when passion is about.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-02-12 06:16 AM

this is a gem you got here. This little nugget of truth tells so much. The flow is perfection.

Lori

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2014-02-12 08:19 PM

i ditto Lori G's sentiments verbatim..

after the second verse i smiled..

i just love that, thank you

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2014-02-13 12:51 PM

i love the nuances od sentiments which bring love in different ways a....considérations are not always the same, thanks for the accurate and delicate reading

yann

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2014-02-20 10:01 PM

Excellent. It is often hard to know when it is true love, sexual passion or just an infatuation. enjoyed, jPerry

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.