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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2015-06-12 09:05 PM


To Nanette . . .


I recall how our nights' passion unfurled,
Words were not needed our love said it all.
As I looked down at you I saw a pearl,
You used to kid about my southern drawl.

You were a prize, but thought you were bland.
An Italian Jewess, mystery to me.
I recall our walks, you made me feel grand,
I think we both felt passionately free.

But she had no idea that I was bad,
A man who fought life with all of its fears.
Oh, I loved Nanette, I knew what I had,
Think of her daily, we had some good years.

If I could go back when she was my wife,
We'd have a white picket fence kind of life.

©March 17, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (06-12-2015 09:43 PM).]

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Michael
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1 posted 2015-06-14 11:35 AM


A beautiful reflection, Jer.  It's nice when you can look back at something that was wonderful, and just appreciate it for what it was, without harboring any hurts or resentments.  A great place to be.

Michael

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-06-14 11:45 AM


Oh, there are hurts, but I guess they have been tempered throughout the years. Thank you, Michel.

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devina
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3 posted 2015-06-14 01:23 PM


"If I could go back when she was my wife,
We'd have a white picket fence kind of life."
~ This is a most dreamy verbiage of "peace" that precedes time & tugs heart that way.

Lovely thoughts here, Jerry..be wellz
~T

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-06-14 03:12 PM


Thank you Tanya, I appreciate your thoughts.

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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2015-06-17 10:32 PM


I can sense your yearning...its painful when you miss opportunities...james
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2015-06-17 10:34 PM


Yeah you're right, James,

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