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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-09 06:39 PM

I want to kill her for what she's done.
I want to feel my powerful fingers around her throat!

I want to see her grimace as overwhelming fear sets deep in her widened eyes!

I want to feel her body grow limp in my grasp!

I want to see her in her death agony!

(***RRRrrrrriiiiinnnnnggggg!***)

(shuts vacuum cleaner off and wipes hands on apron before lifting phone)

"Hello?"..."Oh, it's you dear."

"Yes my sweet, I'll have dinner all set for you and your ladies group. I'm just tidying things up a bit.
Laundry and all you know."

"See you at six? Alright dear. Yes dear. Good-bye dear."

(****click****)

(hangs up phone and turns vacuum back on)

I want to kill her!
I want to feel my powerful fingers around her thro...

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (02-10-2014 03:28 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-02-09 06:50 PM

Jeez! 'Nuff said, Bluesy.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2014-02-09 07:20 PM

if you won a lottery, I bet you'd hire a maid and a cook

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2014-02-09 07:29 PM

That's really a great rendering of modern times in a household. Once upon a time husbands would have been horrified had they been asked to exchange the roles ... Now there are brave ones who apparently fit nicely into the role of house husband, but what goes on in their minds you have just told us and I bet you didn't even exaggerate!!

Margherita

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2014-02-09 09:29 PM

Thanks y'all!

(All in fun you know!

)

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2014-02-10 01:05 AM

so vivid scene and thoughts, this is original and convincing

thanks a lot

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2014-02-10 05:55 AM

Like WE weren't thinking the same thing when HE called and said the the same thing we we were ever LUCKY enough to GET to be a STAY HOME mom. Funny now that the Guys are doing it, it is a luxury for us Gals to be able to stay home. It has always been an underrated job. You point out a good work ethic and rule of thumb for getting along ...sometimes you just grin and bear it and do stuff you'd rather not (with a smile).
Enjoyed your realistic write.

Lori

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

7 posted 2014-02-10 06:53 AM

quote:
Like WE weren't thinking the same thing when HE called and said the the same thing

It's a sure bet you were, but what was your reaction when he told you he was having his "ladies group" over?

Thanks for the 'hit' Lori (Please! No pun intended nor desired!)

...just bein' Bluesy

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