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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 The day is obeying the freedom, to yawn A river of veins is holding its breath Slathers of sol, warm the defeated All of the folds of her drapes, are, completed Our sigh is beholding, a lake in the sky The skin of her longing is starting to cry Afoul of the whether, finally takes plight A stream of sub consciousness screams, through the night They swim to the bank and they took out a moan And spent it with interest from sin they atoned I hope you forgive all the thoughts, I pretend The edge of afraid is the meaning of friend |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Richy- I adore this! It is a delightful tossed salad of words and meanings. Since you mentioned friend, I was just thinking about a late friend of mine...I might just repost... Lori  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
awwww love the food reference.. yes please do i'd love to read it Thanks Lori G, have a great Sunday |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Great wordplay here, Richy. I seem to say that often about your poems. Truth is out . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Jerry.. words and i are definitely playmates.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Richy, I think you are a fantastic companion, your thoughts are dancing steps and the whole performance is just enthralling. Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a very loving tribute to sincerity I guess also, all words and images are concerning, thanks a lot yann |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely cadence Richy, I really enjoyed the flow and form of this. Nicely done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Margy, you know i feel likewise.. and thanks for always leaving such kind and gracious replies.. you're the best |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Yann, you always have such positive things to say.. i appreciate it |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
wow Kit what a wonderful surprise to hear from you, thank you so much i'm really glad you enjoyed it.. best wishes to you as well |
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