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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2015-05-05 08:26 AM



oh those years behind us
murmurs to us
in these days of old
we were merry pranksters
born of women
this child
and dared to grow
from acid rock
we had our dreams
ahhh . . . not understanding
what the passing
years meant
we assumed they would
last without end
eh . . . it is the tinge
of our thoughts
where we really had no plan
just rode that acid rock
like a tempest hard driving
even now
near the end
we still hearken back
to what was then
listen to the oldies rock station
and revisit yesterday’s
righteous , soul-cleansing rock
acid rock
thinking of Woodstock
as we hobble along
using our walkers
nodding our heads
to the beat of yesterday

©April 23, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2015 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
EmmaRose
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1 posted 2015-05-05 08:31 AM


It's nice to have those sweet dreams of youth
to hang onto
If only we knew then, how sweet they were, but actually I think I did, I wish I could go back there many days. Nothing like youth is there?

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-05-05 08:38 AM


When you are right, Emma, you are right. Youth is wasted on . . . Well, yeah, you know the rest . . . What we were back then completely and forever was dependent on the fact that we were YOUNG. Memories. You betcha!

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Michael
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3 posted 2015-05-05 09:08 PM


just barely missed out on being a participant in the Woodstock generation, but I can still remember the images from it in my childhood.  have always been quite envious.     nice bit of nostalgia here.

Michael

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-05-05 09:46 PM


Yeah, it was a wild ride, Michael, I have to say that it was. Some of the absolute greatest rock music ever came out of that era. (Money for nothing . . . women for free) Ah, thank you for your kind comments . . .

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devina
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5 posted 2015-05-06 02:52 PM


knew you rocked Jerry!

I missed out on missing that love-fested music scene...no fair!

enjoyed your trip hun
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



JerryPat2
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6 posted 2015-05-06 03:00 PM


Oh yeah, I went from good old county to acid rock overnight it seems. I still like "old" country and "old" acid rock. That's me, Babe!

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2015-05-07 06:35 AM


"All we are is dust in the wind."
                          Kansas

With three older brothers I grew up on it all...Ahh..to be back in kindergarten again!~L

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2015-05-07 08:32 AM


Absolutely Lori. Would that we could go back and live it over again. Eh . . . as you quoted, we are merely "dust in the wind."

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jjote
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9 posted 2015-05-07 01:22 PM


hey, you're not that "old" and aged, that you'd want to sit in the sun just reminiscing. It's good for the soul though, as long as the good ole days were that good.
JerryPat2
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10 posted 2015-05-07 01:29 PM


Hah! Nope, I'm not the kind to sit in the sun reminiscing, jjote, but like most of us I do wander back in time via the keyboard. My "good old days" weren't so good for a large chunk of my life back then. Still, even bad old days can teach you a few things if you are geared to understanding them. Thank you for reading and commenting, haven't seen you around much lately, good that you are back . . .

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