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Donna Mae
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0 posted 2015-05-01 08:32 AM



The Bracelet

This bracelet is a token
Of love, from me to you
From the mountain of love
That's in my heart
That now comes shining thru.


Though second is,
And will always be
The order of your birth
It never did occur to me
You were anything but,first.


written 2002
1st poem after epiphany.

Donna

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-05-01 09:34 AM


Alright! Loved this simple but lovingly penned poem of love being always ahead of the game, Donna . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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2 posted 2015-05-01 02:00 PM


A precious sentiment.    

Michael

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2015-05-01 09:50 PM


nice...james
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