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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2015-04-27 08:29 AM



the tint of today’s sunset, perfect in every way
I image her strolling among her flowers
watching through a window of my thoughts
sun’s kaleidoscope soon to be gone
one day . . .
a vision of togetherness brightens
my dreams of her . . . make it possible
to get through yet one more day
watching the sunset, knowing she sees it too
as bright and vivid
we both watch the end of the day
even as the dazzling colors of the day's end
warms me as I watch
it is naught compared with the
passionate colors
within my heart feeling my love for her
this day of my life,
would that she could see
just what it feels like
to be me

©April 13, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2015 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
1 posted 2015-04-27 08:59 AM


Perfect reflection and expression weaving nature and romance
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-04-27 09:06 AM


Much appreciated, Emma, and thank you also . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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