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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2015-04-26 12:02 PM


o’er the years I have come to
detest the liars, the political liars
who invariably lead us to war
making sure everyone knows this is
a war we have to fight
for the good old red, white and blue
we, the sheeple nod our heads
send our sons and daughters
to the slaughter
praising them as heroes
eh . . . heroes? what they are are dead!
if that wasn’t bad|
enough we now have a president
et al congress
talking that talk, walking that walk
turning us into an America
I do not recognize
kowtowing to our enemies
shunning our friends
someday in the not too distant future
the horde will descend upon us
beheading the men
gangbanging the woman
oh yes, we have given up people
there’s no fight left
the enemy is our government
and no one has the courag3
to stop them
oh, they shout courage
every election time
about what they are going to do
when they are elected
heard it before
last election we sweep the halls of Congress
this will be different
we have people who are ready for the challenge

hah!
there is no battle on Capital Hill
not a damned thing
has changed
the man is still running the government
by executive order
the framers of our constitution
are hiding
their heads in shame
things do not bode well for the once
proud and good old America
how insubstantial we have become
how superficial
doing barely enough to continue to exist
we are in trouble
with leaders not strong enough
to put America first
instead they are disrespectfully
trashing the constitution
and giving solace to our enemies

©April 25, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-28-2015 08:48 PM).]

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devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
1 posted 2015-04-26 06:05 AM


you rock the soapbox here Jerry...
and I'm in full attendance!

~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
2 posted 2015-04-26 10:22 AM


Well said. Thanks for the read.

Melton

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2015-04-26 10:23 AM


Thank you, Melton, happy you read and commented . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2015-04-26 11:14 AM


One of the best of your rants Jerry ... and Oh, So True - we are definitely a country in decline led by "so called" representatives of our will.  Show you how far it goes . . . I live in an incorporated city (Oak Ridge North) near Houston, and face to face the Mayor had the balls to tell me, when I was voicing my thoughts, "City Council does what City Council wants" - that's our government, nation-wide.

We don't have representatives in this country any more, we have an uncontrollable force called "politicians"  that not only control everything. and as long as we let them control their own benefits, salaries, retirements, and more . . . they are "Masters" not "Representatives"



JerryPat2
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5 posted 2015-04-26 11:14 AM


Tanya, appreciate your comments on my poem.

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JerryPat2
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6 posted 2015-04-26 11:17 AM


I know everything you have said is the gospel, Jimmy. It is criminal (literally) what these damn politicians get away with. When you really get to thinking about it, it becomes very depressing.

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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2015-04-26 12:14 PM


Criminal is the word for it, Jerry.
                              Ida

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
8 posted 2015-04-26 12:19 PM


Yes, it certainty is, Ida. Thank you for being here.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2015-04-27 08:40 PM


trouble is weakened politicians that have no morals or honesty...james
JerryPat2
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10 posted 2015-04-27 08:41 PM


You got it, James. Thanks.

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
11 posted 2015-04-28 08:46 PM


Great work Jerry!
Well written!
I enjoyed the vent because it was so applicable.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
12 posted 2015-04-28 08:49 PM


I appreciate your thoughts on my poem, Eric. We are in deep trouble here in what used to be the "home of the brave." I fear the future . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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13 posted 2015-04-28 10:41 PM


I feel you, Jer.  You have rant left in you.  That's a good thing.  I feel mine's been bled out for the most part, as well as with most others I know.

Michael

JerryPat2
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Posts 16975
South Louisiana
14 posted 2015-04-28 10:55 PM


Ahhh . . . Thank you Michael. My rant is tame compared to a merely a few years ago. Still, I spoke my mind. So many of us refuse to do that. America is, I believe, in trouble like we have never seen before . . . Thank you . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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