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Michael
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0 posted 2015-03-29 02:04 PM



Dissertation


So I gave my dissertation
On a life spent walking dead—
Shared with all the sensation
Waking to an empty bed.
I poured years into pages—
Turned the pages, one by one.
A chronicle of the ages
In a world without a sun.

‘Gave my best presentation,
Turning dark the somber hall;
Inside feeling elation,
Holding everyone in thrall.
But soon felt the vexation
Of being misunderstood.
They hoped it would get better,
But I knew it never would!

It was the course of a lifetime,
Wasted on a man like me.
A mountain I would never climb—
A reward I would not see.
‘Tried to placate this puzzled crowd,
Their stares hold me impaled.
The words seem cursed spoken aloud,
My dissertation’s failed.


Michael Anderson


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Alison
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1 posted 2015-03-29 02:27 PM


All I know is this leaves me breathless. I don't always understand, but I do always feel.  This, I understand.

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2 posted 2015-04-17 05:09 PM



you did this podium well fore sure, gripping silence and all!
enjoyed
~d

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3 posted 2015-04-18 03:20 PM


Thank you Alison and Tanya.  your words mean much.

Michael

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4 posted 2015-04-19 06:46 PM


When people do not want to hear, it matters not how clear the bell sounds.
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