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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 I finally know why night is crowded That’s where all the shadows sleep Lightning’s never, free of charge That’s where all the dark is cheap A tree just fell off the stem of an apple How could someone ever planet Gravity is mass depressant All it does is keep us, down I finally know why space can bend It’s from the time that didn’t spend Life is just a chain reaction We’re the force of, Its attraction |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This one's play on words I really like. Enjoyed. j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You are good. No. You are brilliant. Yes. I enjoyed this one VERY much. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you gentleman.. have a wonderful saturday  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I enjoy your poems, like the rhymes and play on the thoughts. A |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Reading you Richy, is like watching a kitten play with a ball of yarn. Fascinating to say the least. ~L |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
hi Richy, this is the style I enjoy so much. almost like writing down an observation , hope that makes sense. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Ali dear thank you for the saucer of milk Lori G i hope you have a purrfect sunday meow |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Vincent... yes, observations in my mind nice to meet you friend |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I second what Lori said so wonderfully!You write with joy, and a love of language, it's very much felt by the reader |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Emma you are the rose in my vase.. |
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