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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2015-03-20 11:35 PM


My grandson does not want to give me
a hug or a kiss, but runs up to me
waiting by the door to wave goodbye
as his dad is driving me to the train station.

Just three years old, I can feel his kind of sadness
when he senses people are leaving his world
not to be there to play with him when he wakes up
or sit beside him when he eats his meal
while watching with him his favorite children shows
on his mini ipad.

He doesn't want his hair tousled, says he is a boy
and only girls sit before mirrors fixing their hair
gets this notion maybe from watching me or his mom;
but even his dad combs his hair by the mirror...
this discrimination amuses us.

So I gave him a last wave of goodbye
as the car backs out of the driveway,
and until we're out of sight.
I can imagine him still waving by the door
as if by doing so we might come back again,
never to leave.


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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-03-20 11:44 PM


Ahhh . . . Those grand-kids, especially the boys. I think rebellion is in our genes. He will come back to you.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2015-03-21 10:35 AM


Wonderful write, my friend, thoroughly enjoyed.

j.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-03-21 09:48 PM


nice writing...james
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