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She Was . . .
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She Was . . . |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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walking ahead of me a woman in an impossible tight skirt turned her head to give me a look deep, sultry emerald eyes met mine whimsical smile on her mouth when she turned her head back forward she gave her head a shake her sunset red hair swayed on her shoulders I wept when she hailed a cab ©February 27, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you James. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
 If you saw her get in the cab then I guess you had a good day. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh You might say that Helen. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Captured by a pretty woman... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You betcha, Karilea! ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
hahah ill have to say Jerry that the ending made me laugh out loud, it just perfectly caught me off guard.. perfect timing my friend and a nice story to boot.. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh!Heh! That made my day, Richy, thank you. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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