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Looking Toward the Stars
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Looking Toward the Stars |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I look toward the heavens on this star-clustered night her essence is there for me to feel captivating me although so far away she baths among twinkling stars smelling of bouquets of sweet smelling flowers I am spellbound to say the least on this wintry winters air but she emits heat from the stars which warms my body and my essence she summons me and . . . tasting the heat from her lips I am filled with imaginary delights she leaves her bath among the stars to dry off within the glow of the moon and conjures up within me delights untold ©February 24, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You give new meaning to "having your head in the stars"... Very romantic! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori. I was feeling quite romantic when I wrote it. Check out Morning Mirror. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I checked it out and told you what I found.~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes. I know. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
We often find the essence of a loved one, past or present, in all things we see. Very nice |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Isn't that the truth, Rex. Appreciate your thoughts . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
At a loss for words.Enjoyed your romantic episode. Jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
YOU! At a loss for words? I'd never believed it if I hadn't seen it with my own eyes, Heh.Heh Just kidding around, Jo. Thank you for reading my poem. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You give a new meaning to star-filled eyes with this one, Jer. Nicely rendered. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate the read and comments, Michael. Thank you . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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