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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2015-01-31 10:44 PM



when we met
    something in the
        cosmos turned on
            the fire in my heart
                and I exploded within

©January 30, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2015 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2015-02-03 03:01 PM


Love it!
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-02-03 03:06 PM


Thanks NL, I appreciate that you liked (loved) my little poem. Thanks for being here.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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3 posted 2015-02-03 05:16 PM


Perfect little gem ...

Margherita

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-02-03 05:20 PM


Thanks a lot, Margherita . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
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5 posted 2015-02-10 01:18 PM


Perfect!

j.

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2015-02-10 01:42 PM


Thank you Jimmy . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2015-02-11 09:45 PM


I think you broke new ground with this one my friend! Way to go! ~L
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2015-02-11 09:50 PM


Hello Lori . . . Thank you very much.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
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9 posted 2015-02-14 04:19 AM


wonderful!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2015-02-14 07:53 AM


Thanks Tracie.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jjote
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11 posted 2015-02-14 10:12 PM


wow such deep emotions in so few words. I'd love to be able to write in this form, but I tend to be wordy.(:
JerryPat2
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12 posted 2015-02-14 11:40 PM


Thank you, jjote, I thoroughly appreciate your kind words.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2015-02-23 08:20 PM


enjoyed...james
JerryPat2
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14 posted 2015-02-23 08:32 PM


Thanks James.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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