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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-12-24 02:30 PM



a life like mine
the roaming, wayfaring existence
n'er settling down
always searching for . . .
that then is the question misplaced
for after awhile I forgot what
my search was for
during my travels I saw things
human beings could do to one another
my heart began to harden
refused to thaw
although three wives
other women
tried to melt my hard-edged look
upon the world
they all tried in vain
but in the places I had been and what I saw
caused me to understand that riches
and everything that went with it
beautiful mansions in themselves
could never be called a home
much too late I discovered
that the most primitive dwelling
if love was inside its walls
was most assuredly was a home
I freely admit
in all my wanderings
I never found a home
my attitude killed what it took
to make a house a home
I'm very regretful about that part of my life
so . . .
here I sit
inside this dwelling I call The Hovel
penning this little poem
and o'er the years I have written
my poems, my novels
the novels I am proud of
but you see
it is the poetry which finally
put love into my heart
as you read this
I am inside The Hovel
with my precious little dog Zoe
on Christmas Eve
and yes
The Hovel is now a home

©December 24, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2014-12-24 02:36 PM


fine "slice of one's life" write ...

reminds me of the lasting 'damage' of the "Great Darkness" (Nam era)
and especially the effect on anyone who walked along the wall of skulls
in Cambodia.

I've never found a 'real and lasting' "home"
either (at least not psycho-emotionally, etc.)

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-12-24 02:43 PM


Ahh, Bruce I understand what you mean about never finding a home. But you see where I am, and how my attitude has drastically changed I have all I need right here and now and it is a home. Would that I had a women to share it. Of course, but I am very happy and I have peace of mind. Thanks for the read and comment.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

Redstart
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3 posted 2014-12-24 03:43 PM


I wrote when I first read your poetry that you bled honesty. You have carved your soul into this poetry site, and it has made a mark. Merry Christmas, Jerry.
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-12-24 03:52 PM


Thank you Redstart, I so appreciate these words. Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

Sunshine
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5 posted 2014-12-24 07:31 PM


A Christmas wish come true!
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-12-24 07:37 PM


Yes, and thank you, Karilea.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
7 posted 2014-12-24 10:09 PM


Never too late, as they say.  Some of us are just "late starters" --- but think of the "fun" getting there!!

j.

JerryPat2
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Posts 16975
South Louisiana
8 posted 2014-12-24 10:26 PM


Yeah, some of it was fun, Jimmy. Can't deny that.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

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