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Fog |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 early morning gray fog touches friend and foe alike driving is hazardous at best it slithers like a ghost into all the rooms in the city cascading down upon those asleep street lamps lights are muted and rather ominous fog surrounds it in a gloomy flourish over open spaces it hugs the ground a man looks down from high windows at his ghost-white city the fog seems to catch and hold him within its resolve mesmerized by shadows revolving within his thoughts ©November 19, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, I found this to be most profound: "the fog seems to catch and hold him within its resolve mesmerized by shadows revolving within his thoughts" Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori, most appreciated.  If they give you ruled paper write sideways. [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-20-2014 10:00 AM).] |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
the fog is compelling, hard to avoid and not morph into , whether to fight against or to submit to |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I prefer the submitting route, Ema. Thanks for visiting my world. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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