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OwlSA
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0 posted 2014-11-16 08:21 PM



SOMETIMES

https://soundcloud.com/diana-van-den-berg-2/sometimes

Sometimes it is hard to smile . . .
sometimes . . .

A heaviness gets in the way
and stagnates the dance
and breath forgets
and eyes are glazed
sometimes . . .

Shadows hide the light
and dreams are blurred
and trapped in black
and tomorrows die
upon a pyre
stacked high with sticks
as dry as fire
as dead as paper
words erased
sometimes . . .

and song remembers not
and what
was there in colours bright
in skywide light
is forever spent
and shrivelled grey
that is not there
sometimes . . .

and bark and branch
and velvet, silk
and tweed and glass
don’t thrill at finger touch
sometimes . . .

and flowers sweet in flimsy dress
mourn slow with drooping heads
and clouds close in
with sombre stress
and thunder strikes up
the last post grave
with solemn demise
sometimes . . .


Sometimes it is hard to smile . . .
sometimes . . .

Owl

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2014-11-16 08:29 PM


Oh this is sadly beautiful.
I hope you are ok.  Hugs lady owl.

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2014-11-16 09:28 PM


Thank you, Blues.  I am almost always OK.  Sweet of your to be concerned.

Hugs to you too.
Owl

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
3 posted 2014-11-17 01:10 AM


Beautiful yet softy spoken words seem to carry a bit of sadness.I also hope all is well. Jo
OwlSA
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4 posted 2014-11-17 03:27 AM


Thank you, Martyjo, for your kind, compassionate words.  

Owl

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2014-11-17 09:12 AM


fine writing indeed !!
OwlSA
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6 posted 2014-11-17 04:54 PM


Thank you, Bruce.

Owl

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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7 posted 2015-02-01 11:46 PM


Sometimes...you hit the nail right on the head, Diana.
                                     Ida

OwlSA
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8 posted 2015-02-02 02:15 AM


Thank you, Ida.  I hope you aren't sad currently.  

Owl

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2015-02-05 08:23 PM


nice writing...janes
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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10 posted 2015-02-06 01:27 AM


Thank you, James.

Owl

MICHELMAS
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Lancashire England
11 posted 2015-02-06 08:21 AM


sometimes, if only, memories that confuse with time
enjoyed

Michael

OwlSA
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12 posted 2015-02-07 12:35 PM


Thank you, Michael.  

Owl

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