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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-10-14 09:42 AM




Ehhh . . . Thinking and wishing . . .


make everyday count
tell me you love me; I love you
touch me in special places
our life together
pure love has overwhelmed us
our eyes speak togetherness
in our heart the sun
you are tender in your way
and bring me pleasures untold

©October 14, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton



If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-14-2014 11:41 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2014-10-14 10:27 AM


"Tell me you love me; I love you"
I can't think of a sweeter request or for a better reason why.
Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-10-14 10:55 AM


You speaketh the truth, Lori. Thank you.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

EmmaRose
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3 posted 2014-10-14 12:34 PM


to hear this is golden
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-10-14 12:39 PM


Thank you Emma.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

Margherita
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5 posted 2014-10-16 12:04 PM


A perfect little gem that expresses true togetherness most lovingly, dear Jerry.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-10-16 12:12 PM


Thank you very much, Margherita.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

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