Open Poetry #49 |
The hanging gardens of the evenings soul. |
whitbypoet1 Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
Posts 40 |
The glowering moon quivered its quicksilver nervousness Over dancing blossoms that perfumed the midnight air, And from secret thickets crept dark whispers Of drunken whispered blackberry wine, While across the arches of loneliness Strolled images of lost and haunting eyes, Seeking only the connection that sought them Through the hours of narcotic sleep. Starlight caressed the waters of the stream beneath the arches With the finesse of a Monet masterpiece, yet as natural As a baby’s first dream, and willows stirred The stillness of silver, gold and liquid shade Into an abstract serenade of forever, While all around woodland breathed quietly In the pondering reminiscences of a night Like a whirlpool creation of unwinding beauty. Each wide eyed moment held hands, afraid to be alone Before the hours took them quietly away, Each one aspiring to come back again When evening blossoms into a new day, Yet beneath the arches of loneliness Drifted every prayer that whispered to itself, With such a sense of gentleness suspended On the hanging gardens of the evening’s soul… |
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whitbypoet1 Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Beautiful Michael |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
You created the images, and I took them to my streamed valley in the moonlight. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Imbued with rich images of the beauties of Nature, wild and wonderful, as I like them best. I am still feasting on them. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Outstanding imagery! Well done! Lori |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Serene, sublime, a gentle caress, a whisper in the wind, refreshing, an so breathtakingly beautiful...truly |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Yes, to all the others said,I repeat.Beautiful, Thank you for the view through your eyes and onto your pen,. Jo |
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