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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-09-19 08:48 AM


Going through some old stuff looking through it for open mike fodder. Found this that I had forgotten I had written...

Things so small
you think they
don’t matter
at all
Except for the fact
they stole my heart
in bits and pieces
And now
you won’t weaken
my knees
even when
I tell you how

LGR©11/11/11

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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-09-19 09:06 AM


Ahhh . . . Found poetry or not, you're on a roll these days. I seem to recall that same tone in many of your poetry posting a couple of years ago.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-09-19 09:55 AM


Yes, the ebb and flow of life for sure. In this moment in time I'm on a relative cloud nine.

Lori

Michael
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3 posted 2014-09-20 10:23 AM


This one sure has a powerful message beneath the easy flow to it, Lori.  I like it.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2014-09-20 10:32 AM


Michael,
I like to think this is pretty straight forward about what my beef was at the time. Funny thing is, I don't remember writing this one (that happens more often than you might think)Apparently the problem didn't last or never really existed.

Lori

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