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Open Poetry #49

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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2014-09-17 07:08 AM

And he thought
that he was saving me
from the pain of
his inevitable death

he did not know
that it was a disservice
how was I to mourn-
To let go of him
He, who was never even mine

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-09-17 08:54 AM

Ouch! Words to burn the heart and soul delivered in a subdued, but scathing manner.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2014-09-17 10:10 AM

Oh I totally get this!
Nicely said and done.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2014-09-17 10:23 AM

Beautifully worded. Good to see you posting.
jo perry

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2014-09-18 06:50 AM

I have missed your writing! This is a perfect example of what you do so well. wonderful to read you again. More please...

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2015-08-13 10:03 PM

fine writing...james

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