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Dark Shower |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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The rain came like a sigh of relief in the dark before dawn Precious drops disappearing in the dry cracked earth It was all over in the catch of a breath Leaving only the sound of crickets |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Not nearly enough rain to matter, except to cool things off for a little bit. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wow the rain came like a sigh of relief. Love that thought!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, rain's been a rarity out here. Another dry winter and we're all bound to wither up and blow away with the dust. Michael |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
love that sudden rain, makes me feel the poetry too  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You captured that moment of refreshment perfectly! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I would love to see some rain myself, Lori. Ida |
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