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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2014-07-13 12:02 PM


  Disciples of the Moon
  (for all “moon-a-tics”
     everwhere!)

Beneath an infinite mantle
   of stars
and ‘endless’ mountain
tops that emerge and
vanish with the rolling
   clouds,
the tremulous sound
of distant evening bells
floats on a sultry Summer
   breeze
and dances with the wisps
of twilight mist, moonbeams,
and silver-tipped shadows
assembled for this occasion
   by the night
along this forest-meadow
   edge.
On evenings such as this,
one recalls the dreams of
youth and loves forever
lost to the inexorable
whirlpool of time.
Let go, let go … of all
the memory-wounds
   and fears.
Will your mind and
loving spirit-heart
to the care of that
grand-mystic moon.

              --- b. e. adams (7/13/2014)



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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2014-08-10 08:26 PM


So many memories come to mind.
Picture perfect poetry and ponderings.
Reads like a slide show.  

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2014-08-15 08:45 AM


As a hopeless moon-a-tic I find this enchanting.
                           Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2014-08-15 02:11 PM


thanks again, Ida!
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4 posted 2014-08-18 10:42 AM


Your words paint such a wonderful picture, taking me away from the day and into a night of moongazing. Beautiful!
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2014-08-18 02:05 PM


thank you !   "moongazing" is always a pastime most fine, methinks?!
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