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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-07-10 07:33 AM



I remember the days
when I could make the world stop spinning
obliterate the sun and moon
make time standstill
as everything was frozen in time
I was a mere
shadow of myself
nobody
building worlds where I was rich
stopped oceans from flowing
because I could
I built new worlds to live in
yes, I can still recall
my vivid seven-year-old mind

Whot happened?

©June 29, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
bel1e
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1 posted 2014-07-10 09:59 AM


innocence lost...we are wonderous at seven, it's true~*~*

              

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-07-10 10:29 AM


Yep. Life got in the way of innocence . . . A natural progression, or is that digression? Thank you Baby Girl.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

bel1e
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3 posted 2014-07-10 11:00 AM


LOL...yeah...things go downhill from there...

XOXO

              

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-07-10 03:05 PM


ah to be an innocent 7yr old in a war free country, where one is not starved or in slavery or training to kill or walking miles to safe boarders. We have been very blessed to have had our peaceful imaginations with which to play with. You brought back warm memories of troll dolls and other wonderful things.  Still there are too many places in the world where the kids don't get to be children very long.
Good write my friend.

Lori   

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2014-07-10 03:18 PM


Thank you Lori. About those children of other countries who have a hard life. The government is allowing tens of thousands of them to walk into America where they will be fed, clothed and given medical help. Thank goodness the government is a kind and benevolent daddy and momma to them.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2014-07-10 03:25 PM


True Jerry! Thanks for the reminder and a pox on all those who are so insensitive as to treat
immigrants that risk their lives to get here like they are vermin to be eradicated.  

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2014-07-10 03:59 PM


Right. NOT!

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

latearrival
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8 posted 2014-07-10 07:59 PM


The New England Hurricane of 1938 (or Great New England Hurricane, Yankee Clipper, Long Island Express, or simply the Great Hurricane of 1938) was the first major hurricane to strike ~~~

And I was seven and have a few old memories of this.Standing on the porch with mom hanging on to the post and rails, waiting for brother to come home from school.Look this one up on the internet. Devastation`jo``

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2014-07-10 08:20 PM


I certainly will look up the Great Hurricane of 1938, Jo. Appreciate your thoughts on the poem.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2014-07-10 08:28 PM


I looked it up, and you were right, it was devastation. I'm more familiar with hurricanes than I really want to be down here in Louisiana. Back then with the Great Hurricane of 1938, there wasn't any alert systems like we have now with Internet tracking hurricanes path. I was one year away from being born when that monster struck.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

latearrival
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11 posted 2014-07-11 12:42 PM


Yes, Jerry Pat, it was something no one who was alive at the time has ever forgotten.jo
JerryPat2
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12 posted 2014-07-11 08:45 AM


Innocence personified, Jo. Appreciate your thoughts on the poem.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

Marchmadness
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13 posted 2014-07-13 02:21 PM


Yes, Me too.
           Ida

JerryPat2
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14 posted 2014-07-13 02:24 PM


Heh.Heh Gotcha Ida. Thank you for being here.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

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