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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-05-04 05:52 AM

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suspicion follows dread
to an unfriendly dark alley
trying not to get caught
arms and legs tangled
the two lover's kisses
seems to last as long as
an ocean's tidal wave
ours is a sanctuary within
we have our own deity
lips mashed on my various
creases against my anxiety
my skin, your skin, deliver
our weakness to just say no
to pure hungering appetite
as we both hide our rings
escape into a sinful vortex
of fleshly liberation with no
escape hatch when finished

©April 11, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-05-04 08:15 AM

Hot Stuff Mr Bolton! I think my glasses were beginning to fog over.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-04 08:18 AM

Thank you, Mrs. Rhoden.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-05-04 08:51 AM

When caught in "Loves's Riptide" and you are helpless against the undertow, SWIM SIDEWAYS! If you can. Lol Ditto what Lori said. Enjoying your poetry, JP.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-05-04 09:29 AM

Swimming sideways is a possible escape hatch that I hadn't thought of before, MS E. Thank you for your input.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2012-05-04 11:30 AM

Only if you want to escape, JP... not many of us do!
Smiling, liking your poem.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-05-04 11:41 AM

Truer words were never spoken, MS E.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

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Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2012-05-04 04:56 PM

ohhhh my this is a steamy image you write us...well said

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-05-04 05:22 PM

Thank yew, Karen. I had to stop in the middle of writing it, the keyboard caught on fire. Hah! Thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2012-05-05 09:24 AM

Well done Jerry!

Whew, that ending is a bruiser.
The poetic picture of raw passion.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-05-05 10:43 AM

Appreciate it, Eric, and I agree, the ending has bear trap possibilities.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2012-05-14 02:13 AM

enjoyed...James

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-05-14 05:21 AM

Thanks James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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