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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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0 posted 2012-05-01 06:54 PM


look up into the sky
covered in purple silk
woven by celestial worms

look
see
behold

the sky tells a story
of courage
of love
of fear
and overcoming it too

lift your eyes to the heavens
and behold eternity on earth

© Copyright 2012 richard salgado - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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1 posted 2012-05-01 07:14 PM


BRAVO!!BRAVO!!! I love it...How perfect "behold eternity on earth"
ponderthepoetorrsx
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2 posted 2012-05-01 08:33 PM


thank you

yolilitzli (a word meaning life, my names richard by the way)

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