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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-04-28 07:33 PM


Words I Wanted to Say

What can I say of Tanya
that hasn't been said before,
all of the words have
probably been employed
by different men that
she chose to enjoy.
She's very feminine,
having curves in all
the desired places,
her smile is pleasing
all thoughts of sadness
she pleasantly erases.
Perhaps she's an angel
gracing planet earth
to brighten my day,
so I told her she looks
like a beautiful model,
words I wanted to say.

JamesLee
27April
2012





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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2012-04-28 07:38 PM


James
Right on, get it out there, especially when it is as complimentary as this.
Whatever type of angel, she's one in your eyes and that's a kindness regardless of all other opinions and appearances.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
2 posted 2012-04-28 08:01 PM


Agree with ethome, my friend...

j.

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2012-04-28 08:05 PM


She indeed is an angel...Your words make it so...what a lovely tribute to Tanya...love the beauty of this poem...
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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4 posted 2012-04-28 08:06 PM


Say it with pride.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
5 posted 2012-04-28 08:34 PM


(:

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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6 posted 2012-04-29 01:48 AM


Special words enjoyed by her, I'm sure.
Enjoyed James,
ms. e

dreamgal
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7 posted 2012-04-29 10:01 AM


What a beautiful testimont to this lucky girl,
said so proudly. Enjoyed this!

2islander2
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by the sea
8 posted 2012-04-29 02:38 PM


hi james, you are a lucky man, splendid,


yann

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9 posted 2012-05-20 07:15 PM


we all have our own values
JL
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Texas, USA
10 posted 2012-05-21 01:48 PM


Well spoken, "Words to Say"
Excellent, James!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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