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As Breathing |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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AS BREATHING 25 January 2012 My words and arms find you and wrap themselves around you in a protective cocoon, as yours do me. They all do this for every imaginable and unimaginable reason but mostly because they don’t seem to be able to do otherwise. Owl |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is very beautifully written. I could feel the love. I truly enjoyed the read!!!  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I can feel the loving warmth of this poem. Enjoyed. kat >^..^< |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
 loved this!Love is the life of the soul... |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
sweet when love is mutually felt in such symmetry |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem, Ms. E |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine simple Romanticism! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I like the idea of the arms having no choice but to intertwine.. It is very romantic when you can't control yourself when you are with someone that has that effect on you.. Well done Diana |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, all. Owl |
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