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today, everything is blue
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today, everything is blue |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Today, everything is blue, the sky, the sea, the eyes, the mysteries and the wool on Cathy's shoulders, everything is blue in my suitcase, the memories and Jordan, everything is blue in the garden, even the strawberries, finally... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When the blues hit you there is nothing quite like it. Cloudy skies and blue, blue, blue . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done, my friend, very well done... j. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I'll bet the music is blue too. Well done Yann, ms. e |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hope this doesn't mean you are blue too, yann. Lovely poem. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You wrapped me so nicely in your blue-ness, dear Yann. The only thing that makes me frown are the blue strawberries ... well they transformed magically into blueberries. Blue is the color of vastness I say, you are vast in your expressions, dear Yann. Margherita  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You managed, quite artfully, to take a personalized poem and make it accessible to your readers. Not easily done, but I think you achieved your mark, underscored with blue strawberries... smile Much enjoyed. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jerry, it is so funny that the poem was written in french , first , in which language, blue is only a color, a precious one, but has no signification like in english, no sadness at all here, but the poem works with it too, for the best,thanks a lot, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jwesley, enjoyed your supportive comment, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
nicely said ebony, thanks, music can be blue too, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks james, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
not anymore, ida, for precision you can read my answer to jerry, the difference between french and english and so the distorsion , have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks margherita, this is so kind, i explain that blue is not a feeling here, but the color, which in french creates an emotion, like vastness indeed, thanks a lot again for reading and commmenting, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you serenity, for the supportive and omprehensive comment, blue is at purpose here, enjoyed it, yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I have tasted those blues lately .. they tasted peaceful on my tongue as I kind of stayed by myself. A |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* I just relaxed into it...well written... *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's a very peaceful blue world Yann Very nice. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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