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Vying For Your Attention
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Vying For Your Attention |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Draping my restless across your distracted Vying for your attention competing with responsible things Your long and hard you put into work while I wait upon your idle LGR©4/12/12 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! You bet those responsible things are big priorities, Lori. Good stuff. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Oh I know, but sometimes i feel like I should dab a little starter fluid behind each ear instead of perfume LOL  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I gotcha! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The developed concerns within the comforts of familiar love Well written Lori. Haven't read your work for some time and it's still as well done as ever. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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