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Lake Juno |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The light At the end Of the dock Casts a pale glow Over frozen water There is A wooden boat Missing its oars Up on the bank Under a cover Of snow Occasionally One will see A line of deer Slowly Making its way Among the distant trees They pass in silence Much like life After a number of years With nothing left to say . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I could almost hear the silence at the end of this write. Nice one. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah . . . Loved this, my friend. Saw and felt. j. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It takes a true poet to describe that awkward silence at the end of life whan your ticket has expired. Ida |
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