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Open Poetry #48

Alex in Wonderland

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-04-06 11:24 AM

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It’s a book
Too bad to be read
The pages full
Of clerical errors

Who would believe
The queen is a pig
That lumbering cows
At the crack of dawn
Are capable of ruling
The moon

Blue jays cry
And seagulls scream
With unrelenting tedium
Schools of dolphins
Die on shore

While horses roam
The bitter fields
All riders retired
To local bars

Old Arthur Gawain
And cynical Percival
Drinking their beer
From aluminum shoes

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2012-04-28 07:32 PM

Interesting images applied to modern day situations.
Not sure I understand but I had a great time trying to figure out what was filtering through the ambiguity.
Good writing!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-04-28 08:08 PM

Interesting play with words...I created my own images and quite liked it...well written

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2012-04-28 08:33 PM

I really like this one.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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